First Draft of the Revolution (Emily Short, Liza Daly, inkle)

The second point is that interactively revising text involves multiple simultaneous choices which influence one another. Instead of asking the reader “then what did the character do?” or “what happened next?”—as choose your own adventure stories do—First Draft of the Revolution asks the reader to consider a number of simultaneous decisions, try them out, take some of them back, and finally settle on an acceptable version before moving on.[Author’s description]

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  1. A wonderful piece of work. My expectations were high seeing as it’s Emily Short, and she handles the fresh form masterfully. The author’s note on the main page is well worth a read also.