Comments on: GRAVEDIG.TWS (Leon Arnott) http://www.freeindiegam.es/2013/04/gravedig-tws-leon-arnott/ Thu, 10 Apr 2014 18:32:45 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.8.2 By: Louis F. http://www.freeindiegam.es/2013/04/gravedig-tws-leon-arnott/#comment-55629 Tue, 30 Apr 2013 10:14:18 +0000 http://www.freeindiegam.es/?p=7064#comment-55629 An interesting premise served with fluid, captivating use of hyperlinks. I liked the ending, felt definitive and foreboding.

]]> By: L http://www.freeindiegam.es/2013/04/gravedig-tws-leon-arnott/#comment-55424 Mon, 29 Apr 2013 16:05:24 +0000 http://www.freeindiegam.es/?p=7064#comment-55424 If anyone’s especially interested, I put a visually made-over version up on my site: http://l.j-factor.com/gmhtml5/GRAVEDIG.TWS

]]> By: nobody http://www.freeindiegam.es/2013/04/gravedig-tws-leon-arnott/#comment-55422 Mon, 29 Apr 2013 15:47:45 +0000 http://www.freeindiegam.es/?p=7064#comment-55422 This is fantastic, sophisticated in all sort of ways, most notably, perhaps, how the story-telling structure reflects the words-add-to-or-replace-other-words Twine macros. (It’s there in the first passage even, the way the “fine time to be out” line quavers between a flat read and an ironic one as the context is expanded by each click.)

Also, is this the first twine game to skip the return-to-intro-screen-loop at the end? Regardless, it’s such a strong (and chilling) choice here. I’m really surprised how effective it felt, the uncanniness of a Twine page with no links.

]]> By: Lillian http://www.freeindiegam.es/2013/04/gravedig-tws-leon-arnott/#comment-55192 Sun, 28 Apr 2013 18:46:10 +0000 http://www.freeindiegam.es/?p=7064#comment-55192 LOVED THIS

]]> By: Whisperbat http://www.freeindiegam.es/2013/04/gravedig-tws-leon-arnott/#comment-55182 Sun, 28 Apr 2013 17:55:57 +0000 http://www.freeindiegam.es/?p=7064#comment-55182 This was cool.

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