Comments on: Dining Table (Leon Arnott)

By: Louis F.

Louis F. — Tue, 09 Apr 2013 07:19:35 +0000

It worked in Chrome! A wonderfully surreal premise that takes some fascinating turns further on.

By: Louis F.

Louis F. — Mon, 08 Apr 2013 10:06:38 +0000

I’m using Explorer (for unfortunate reasons). No popup alert message. I’ll try with Chrome : )

By: L

Mon, 08 Apr 2013 09:26:56 +0000

Which browser? Also is there a popup alert error message?

By: Louis F.

Louis F. — Mon, 08 Apr 2013 08:51:22 +0000

I’m getting several “macro not found” in red background and cannot proceed past the second page. Anything I can do about that?

By: Auto

Auto — Mon, 08 Apr 2013 08:42:10 +0000

Absolutely brilliant.
Reminded me of the Barbie story from A. M. Homes “The Safety of Objects”.

By: David

David — Mon, 08 Apr 2013 05:56:32 +0000

This was pretty good. I’d love to see it elongated into an interactive novel!

By: Phack

Phack — Mon, 08 Apr 2013 04:11:03 +0000

Wow. Great story, and somewhat terrifying. Also, Leon really knows how to make a good looking Twine game! Interesting: several of his games deal with vast size discrepancies.

By: Matthew

Matthew — Mon, 08 Apr 2013 03:18:52 +0000

This really pulled me in. I wish this was longer, even if that’s unnecessary.

By: Bryce McQuern

Bryce McQuern — Mon, 08 Apr 2013 00:23:27 +0000

This reminds me of Carol Emshwiller. It made me a little sick to think of loving someone who is bad to you.